Tuesday, December 22, 2009
december 22 entry 21
there once was an old man named nick he lived on a street called pickle street and there were the pickle was invented and he could never make a better pickle than his neighbor rick but one day nick went over to rick and asked him how he made the pickle and rick said i just put a cucumber in a jar and seal it up tight and get the best pickle ever and i thought that was wierd so i tried it wone day and i made the best pickle and then nick got shoot THE END
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Wow. Pretty interesting. Where did this idea come from? A rhyme you were familiar with? Kind of scary that he got shot at the end.
ReplyDelete*Please see my other comments. I can't give points for entries that aren't at least a paragraph long. You need to work on writing for the entire time. Thanks.